Micro fiction - the challenge of writing a story in under 100 words was a resounding success, with some writers penning a second offering. 

The Gift stories are presented below.


The Gift by Beverley Asmus

I'm taking inventory: 
"Ten perfect fingers, ditto the toes. Your daddy's fair skin, brown hair, Aunty Nic's 
upturned nose."
 
I adjust the wrap. She wriggles, grunting unbecomingly. 
"Hush, baby, don't cry! Don't you like your mummy's poetry?" 
She nuzzles my breast. 
"There, that's better," I croon. 
Proud as punch, Jordon leans across. 
Kisses my brow. Lightly strokes her cheek. Tickles her ears. 
"Nicole?" he says. It's a question. 
I meet his gaze. "Yes. We owe her that." 
"And more," Jordon says, glassy eyed. 
Thank you, my sister, for this gift. 
Your eggs. 
My womb. This precious child.


The Gift by Eileen Chown

I open my eyes at a rustling noise, by the soft glow of my night light I see a face with white beard and red hat, its bent over the bottom of my bed, where my stocking lays, is it Santa, if he knows I can see him my presents will disappear, I shut my eyes tight, then open them very slightly to peep, he lifts his head looks into my eyes, Santa looks a bit like my Daddy, holding out a square box he gives me my first gift for Christmas with a Ho! Ho! Ho! He is gone.


My friend pats my hand in sympathy, I take a sip of my coffee, I know I should be happy but just once I would like him to buy me a present, every year it is the same old thing for Birthday and Christmas, he says giving me money, get yourself something nice, a surprise would be so wonderful, oh! Don't mind me, I am just feeling very fat and ugly, I double up in pain eyes open in fright, no it is too early, but I think my greatest gift is about to arrive without my loving husband.


The Gift by Debby Raymond

The trouble with her was, she was born gifted. Gifted with a myriad half-talents yet without the persistence to improve any enough to become expert at even one of those endowments. Until she yielded to illness, where she really shone. To be patiently sick is a skill all-comers admire. It sanctifies you before and after death. Ability to lend dignity to the business of life whilst mantling grace to confront its imminent end, is a work of art; the highest gift one might ever be given.


The Gift by Sandy Smareglia

"A great gift - a gift of Dharma conquers all gifts", Manna agreed with Buddha as she aligned her features into the semblance of benevolence required by her position. So many came to bestow offerings as downpayment for the fulfilment of their wishes. If only she could grant them! Manna went back to collecting the numerous offerings - discarding many she found unpalatable. "It is not always possible to see why one is placed on earth" she thought. While she was happy enough with her present position, Manna felt she was destined for greater things. Gathering her new possessions and stowing them in her cheeks, the little temple monkey departed.


The Gift by Marilyn Whitfield

Leah's footsteps echoed on the wooden floor. Today would be the most memorable day of her life. The car trip from Sydney to Tenterfield seemed forever, for a six year old. Her Mother was excited too, in a quiet sort of way. Her Dad said Mother worried about everything. Leah was dressed in her prettiest frock. She reached the door of the special room at the end of the hallway. It was slightly ajar. A nurse beckoned the family inside. Leah's mother sobbed. Asleep in the bassinet lay a baby boy. A precious gift from an unknown mother.


The Gift by Judy Rostedt

She feels the cool waft of the surgeon's hands as he unwinds the bandage around her head. Three operations ... three failures ... Please, God ... not this time! "Trust me, Anna" His calm voice steadies her thumping heart; one sob from her mother and it races again ... Mother knows ... she knows it will fail again! The bandage drops like a gentle kiss onto her clenched hands ... Silence. "Nothing! .... Oh no, mother ... I see nothing!" Tears first in her useless eyes, then a jagged flash of light and he's shimmering before her. "Doctor? ... You're my doctor? ...Oh, God ... I can see again!"


The Gift by Margarita Escalon

She motioned me with her hand to come near. At 6.30am and after a 5km walk I was bursting with my standard of wellbeing. I approached her joyfully and we stood there smiling at each other with an inquisitive look in our eyes. A beautiful sheath covered her middle age, small but full figure and hair. Deep black eyes which seemed to have a language of their own, adorned her cinnamon brown face. I was invited in by gestures and sat on the carpet as she brought food and tea delighting me with the gift of Afghan hospitality.


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