The topic for this task was Psychos.  See below for some of the responses.


A Waiting Game by Dorothy Vicary

The bucket and mop sit in the corner of the kitchen, a huge pile of clean clothes rest on the lounge chair. Sunbeams stream through the opened louvers, and the open planned rooms sparkle. She is a hard working wife, and has a reputation on this army base, as being a spotless housekeeper.

The planned gardens are edged with painted white stones and the lush green lawns spread soft, and sweet smelling, over the earth. All the paths run neatly around the house. A line of tall banana trees act as a wind break to stop the dust from the wirlies, that spring up during the dry season.

He'll be home soon. She sighs and reflects. The inspection will commence as soon as he walks in the door. Rising from her chair, she walks towards the back door, which she opens. The rocks will be repainted tomorrow and he'll hand trim the lawn edges.

Perhaps, I should fold the clothes and put them away. No, he is sure to remove them from the draws and cupboards and refold them. Last week, the pegging of the clothes on the line offended his sense of order. Hankies, undies and socks must be pegged on the inside of the clothes hoist, and everything remaining is pegged according to size.

The sound of the black cockatoos squawking through the tall gum trees sends shivers up her spine. I know the rifle will come out if their noise bothers him, she muses. It's sometime since he went on a shooting spree. The meow of a cat in the back yard causes her to remember the day last year, when he went outside to remove a screeching cat off the Kingswood. It was a feral cat; there were many of these creatures, lurking in the bush; thanks to those who left them behind, after being posted south.

The fierce cat clawed its attacker and his scarred face became the talk of the base. Time to prepare dinner she ponders, I'll get a large onion, peel it, and as soon as I see the car coming down the road, I'll start to slice it. He loves onions; I don't they always make me cry.


Friend or Foe by Liam O’Reilly

I met Ted at a general staff meeting. He worked on the 4th floor in the IT Department, while I was situated in Sales on the second floor, lower in every sense of the word. I immediately liked the fellow – he was charming and outgoing and had a great turn of phrase. We seemed to hit it off from the first day. I am slow to befriend a person and with Ted, for some reason, I was even more wary. He revealed very little about himself on that first day, but even after we got to know each other a bit better, that hesitancy on his part remained. We found that we lived not far from each other and had an interest in footy in spite of loyalties to different teams. We met at the local pub a few times and exchanged social visits.

I suppose you could say we became casual if not close mates. He and his wife and young child were visitors to our place at times, and we attended some of his get-togethers. Ted’s house was big and modern and had all the latest conveniences and gadgets. I often wondered about that, and what I was doing wrong. I knew he earned more than me, but not that much. I couldn’t afford half of the gadgets he had.

As we watched TV one evening at his place we saw an ad for a resort offering a great weekend of fishing.

‘Hey, let’s do that, John. We’ll hire a 4WD, drive there and have a great couple of days’.

He was excited. I like to think things over and move more slowly, Not Ted. He talked me into it this time and we spent the few days together. It cost a lot more than I expected or could afford, - a worry for me, but seemingly not for Ted.

‘We must do this more often, John. Bring the families, next time’.

I muttered something non-committal.

A week or so later I ran into Ted on the ground floor.

‘John, the Cowboys are playing on Saturday. I’ll get some tickets and give you a call during the week’.

‘Great’ I said, as he rushed away.

I waited the rest of the week for news of our tickets and outing. Nothing – no news. I noticed this happened a lot with Ted – the promise of a phone call or some other communication that never materialized. No answer, no explanation, no apology. I eventually learned not to expect too much.

I began to notice other things about Ted. At the pub he drank a lot more than I would consider safe, and he would have no hesitation hopping into the car to drive home. I spoke to him about this a few times but he dismissed it flippantly. One time he told me he had hit a dog on the way home. He did not stop. He laughed about it, seemingly without a thought for the animal or its owners. I concluded he also gave little thought to the danger he created for himself, his family, or other road users.

I now worry about Ted and his attitudes and lifestyle. I looked up his profile at work and found that his qualifications were a lot different to those he had divulged to me in small increments. He is difficult to talk to; you can’t sit down and have a serious discussion with him.

‘Everything is fine, no problems’ he always says.

You know it must be different. It’s difficult to be his friend or confidant.

Outwardly, he appears a decent and fine fellow, but one who seems to move through life wearing a mask.


Passivity by F N Karmatz

The man’s hand was busily filling in the blues, greens, greys and whites with the flat side of his brush. His easel was planted solidly in the scrubby sand, his palette clipped on to it, so as not to be blown over by gusts. The wind-swept lagoon lay before him and he was enthralled by the fuming colours and hues the rough air created. Seemingly deserted, wintry and barren, he wanted to capture its primeval pristine quality, with the stunted shrubs and weedy grasses along its edges. He painted quickly, rewetting his brush with every stroke, the wind blowing his canvas dry in seconds, even as he stood blocking it. He wiped his free hand on his fatigues and added water with a syringe to his palette paints.

When he next looked up, there, half across the lagoon, a bright orange inflatable canoe, a child’s wading toy, was being blown seaward. A small boy was paddling unsteadily and uselessly into the wind. The orange object ruined the unspoiled ambience of his scene. It was an obscene colour. It was destroying his mood. He tried to ignore it and started painting the foreshore instead.

Sideways, the inflatable was caught by a wind gust and flipped. The boy’s head appeared, bobbing in the water, his arm desperately reaching for his canoe. But the wind had already blown the upturned boat meters away. The boy cried out, the sounds carried by the water, but the wind turned it to whimpering.

The man continued filling in the sand colours with a pointed brush, almost dot-painting. He painted quickly, rewetting his brush with every stroke. He was almost finished. He added a few more strokes—a sharp orange brush stroke in the far background and what could be interpreted as fingers, a small hand and wrist just sticking above the white capped lagoon. He thought they added a colourful surrealism to the scene.


Checkmate by Brian Rowell

‘Don’t delay lunch for me today, Irene,’ said Josef as he shrugged on his winter greatcoat. ‘I’m a bit under pressure today…something that has to be finished.’

‘Yes dear,’ replied Irene, in the act of clearing the breakfast table. Still sitting at the table, young Rolf, their son, smiled up at his mother as she lovingly ran her fingers through his hair. She was shorter than her husband though not by much and, as usual, an imaginary crumb was there to be flicked away from the immaculate uniform that stood before her. A ritual, she tugged the lapels, straightened his peaked cap. Detached and unmoved, he turned to go.

A bleak winter landscape greeted them as he made to depart. He glanced at his watch. ‘Must go,’ he said. ‘I have to be at the Kommandant’s office this afternoon…another meeting.’ He smiled wryly. Kommandant Eduard Wirths was an oaf spending much of his time pursuing carnal interests while Josef was left to plan most agenda. He made sure this didn’t do his own career any harm.

‘Someone from HQ. So, I’ve got a lot to get through this morning. But don’t worry. One way or another I’ll get back for Rolf’s birthday party late afternoon.’

He turned to go. ‘Rolf missed you badly when you were away for his last birthday, you know’ said Irene, ‘so he’ll be ever so pleased.’

‘Another snowfall overnight,’ he mused aloud, rubbing his hands together as he set off. He enjoyed walking in the pristine snow. ‘That should finalise my Noma Lab trials.’

Again he smiled and turned briefly to admire his trail of deep footprints in the wintry landscape. Like our journey through life, he thought - come the midday thaw there would be no trace of his passage. But he, Josef, would, one way or another, leave his mark He’d vowed this to himself when serving on the Eastern Front.

The building where he arrived twenty minutes later, though deep within the camp, was the subject of intense security. Only credentialed personnel allowed; Papieren checked daily. He approved of Teutonic thoroughness. His gleaming boots rang on the cement floor of the corridor as he made his way to the office. Chill tiles and grey cement stretched in every direction with, here and there, side corridors leading to laboratories marked: X-RAY, BATHS and one mysteriously, TWIN. Another was labelled DWARFS and yet another, NOMA. It was in this last division where he’d laboured on experimental drugs to cure the symptoms of noma - open sores that never healed. Gypsies shipped from Eastern Europe, particularly the young, were ideal subjects. They exhibited the classic symptoms of noma, ulcerated mouth and genital area. Due to malnutrition, there were hundreds of cases in every draft. First, the infected parts had to be traumatised to resemble battle wounds and to accelerate gangrene. Experimental treatments had progressed through a range of Degussa and IG Farben sulphonamides with near one hundred percent failure rate. As a result, Josef’s division was under increasing pressure. A cure was urgently needed for the treatment of infected battle wounds, particularly for German frontline troops on the Eastern Front.

‘Guten Morgen, Herr Hauptsturmfuhrer.’ As Josef entered his office, the Administrator threw up a nervous salute and Josef knew instantly something was wrong.

Like a pistol shot, Josef’s swagger stick slapped the leather of his gleaming boots. The Clerk fell back a step, blinked and stood to attention.

‘Experimental Laboratory No.3, sir. Noma. The…the subject expired at 0517 hrs, sir…unexpectedly, Herr Hauptsturmfuhrer!’ His eyes were directed at a spot high on the wall above the Hauptsturmfuhrer’s head. Frozen silence greeted his words. ‘We…we have replacements almost ready, sir. Slavs, male and female, are undergoing manual trauma to the affected parts and should be ready within…’

Another pistol shot from the swagger stick and Administrator Feldwebel Lange shrivelled and fell silent. There could be no appeal, he knew, in this court.

Several minutes trembling silence hung in the air before Josef spoke in words of cold steel.

‘Report back to this office in FSMO at 1600hrs today, Feldwebel Lange. There will be a travel order awaiting your collection. Understand?’

‘But, sir, where…?’

‘They are desperate for men of your calibre on the Eastern Front!’

At four o’clock that afternoon, Josef, as good as his word, was on his way home. Rolf’s birthday present rested comfortably in his pocket. The meeting had gone well and the morning incident was obliterated from his mind. First stars of the evening were just beginning to prick a sparkling sky tight with frost and Josef felt the joy of fulfilment. Lights blazed from his house and the merry laughter of children danced through the winter air.

The door opened on a flood of light and warmth. Obediently before him stood Rolf surrounded by three of his school friends. Josef Mengele and son greeted one another with a formal handshake as Josef gave the boy his present, a box, richly tooled in leather.

‘Danke, Papa,’ said Rolf. ‘What is it?’

‘Open it and see.’

The box opened to reveal a miniature chess set, each piece exquisitely carved from finger bones.


Crime: The Eye of the Beholder by Liam O’Reilly

I like this room, nice and bright. Better than the last court I was in, but of course, I have a better class of offence this time. I’ve moved up in the system. Doing well, you could say – supremely well – I hear this is the Supreme Court.

Quite a few people here. They’re all starring at me. Must be the suit that lawyer fellow made me wear. I look great. I smile brightly at them, looks like a nice day outside. That must be their mother over there. She seems to be crying, so I give her a smile too to cheer her up. I think the girl looked a bit like her, but I did not look at her face a lot – I had other things on my mind!! Ha Ha!

They’re making me stand up. A woman walks in from the back with that silly wig-thing on her head. Everyone bows. She must be the Judge – or is she a Judgess? Must look that up when I get back to the cell.

We all sit down. A bloke with a craggy face and squeaky voice is telling everyone how I broke into this big house in Bulimba – no one should be allowed to own a mansion like that. When I get out of here, I’ll go back and wreck it a bit more. Get the mates to give me a hand. He says I beat up this kid who was 13 years old. He deserved it, told me to get out, would you believe? We were in the kitchen – looked more like a restaurant to me – so I grabbed a knife and stuck him in the belly. The look on his face was really something – wish I had had a camera. When he fell to the ground I kicked him around a bit, and then with the knife, carved up his pretty face and made sure that his posh clothes were really messed up. This fellow in the court is now using a lot of fancy words telling everyone what a great job I did. It seems the young fellow died after an hour or so.

His sister came in when I was dealing with the kid. Boy, was she a stunner? I stopped having fun with the knife and went into the even bigger room with all the leather furniture, where she stood like a statue. She started to run when I came towards her but I knocked her down and turned my attention to finer things. More fancy words from the craggy man – not a good description of my handy work - assault, bodily harm, rape, indecent something or other, intent, murder, deadly weapon, break and enter, robbery, minor, it seems she was sixteen. Looked a lot older to me, but who cares? I had great fun. She scratched my face a bit so I got the knife again to show her that was not a very nice thing to do. Plenty of blood now all over the carpet as well as pools of red on the kitchen floor.

After I finished with the girl she wasn’t moving so I lost interest. I toured the house picked up a few things, and knocked a lot more over. It was fun, but I soon got bored. I found a Visa card in the girl’s bag on the table and thought that could be useful. Bad mistake. That’s how the cops caught me. Must remember that next time.

They’re making me stand up again The Judge/Judgess is leaving. It seems that’s it for today, we’ll be back tomorrow. I’m pushed along by one of these fellows in uniform. I’ll fix him later.

I hope this doesn’t drag on too long. I have things to do, people to see.


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